Connected (With Voiceover) - Jarrad

Here is the most recent and nearly finished version of our film - with the voice over in it. We are still choosing whether we want the voice over in it as a few people have said it is a nice addition, however others said that it isn't needed.

Problems at the moment:
With the birds singing at the beginning, I feel the volume needs to be brought down as they sound too loud.


At 3:22, there is no sound at all which makes the clip seem very dead - I will add some ambiance in to fill this.

At 3:28, the train station announcements start too early and is rather quiet. To get the full effect of this, I will move the announcements further on and turn the volume of the announcements/train doors up.

"I think that the film is fine without the voice over as the title at the end of the film shows the viewers that there is a connection between the two." - AS Media Student.